tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5530298882470075663.post3772230828516897867..comments2023-04-25T16:31:22.967-07:00Comments on David Vandepeer - BA Hons CG Arts and Animation: Unit 4: Story Telling - Reverse ChronologyStitchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10703950470101020401noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5530298882470075663.post-67293855275607668532012-02-01T15:30:17.207-08:002012-02-01T15:30:17.207-08:00Hey Phil,
I kind of took this factory as being th...Hey Phil,<br /><br />I kind of took this factory as being the opening of a factory. You know with the red ribbon something that a presidential candidate or renowned person may be involved with.<br /><br />http://www.lasplash.com/uploads//2/ribbon_cutting_ceremony.jpg<br /><br />They would have their bodyguards, and for some reason they are the target for an assassination attempt.<br /><br />So the factory could be a nuclear power plant or something of that nature. Something that people may or may not want in their local neighbourhood. This concept would be aimed at the exterior of the factory as opposed to the interior.<br /><br />The opening ceremony is a perfect oppertunity for assassination.<br /><br />The guys who stand outside of a factory are not body guards are they? They are security guards unless someone of fame is inside.Stitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10703950470101020401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5530298882470075663.post-45382422395489924392012-02-01T15:08:54.828-08:002012-02-01T15:08:54.828-08:00I think the reverse chronology has potential, Stit...I think the reverse chronology has potential, Stitch, but the factory is not working hard enough as an origination point for your narrative; right now your factory could be a 'hotel' or a 'railway station' - or anything. What is the relationship of the factory (and it's purpose) to everything else that goes on? Why would it need a body guard? If it was a cosmetics factory (animal rights activists?), perhaps - or, if your story was a parallel version of Willy Wonka, with some unlucky kid who didn't get a golden ticket, trying any manner of things to get past the bodyguard... Use the factory - make sense of that...tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com