tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5530298882470075663.post8654162353906745209..comments2023-04-25T16:31:22.967-07:00Comments on David Vandepeer - BA Hons CG Arts and Animation: Unit 1: Anatomy - Review - Kurt Neumann's The Fly (1958)Stitchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10703950470101020401noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5530298882470075663.post-7400478612837130202011-09-20T14:11:32.202-07:002011-09-20T14:11:32.202-07:00Okay - I see now - (I replied to your email before...Okay - I see now - (I replied to your email before reading this comment). The point about google books and Athens is that they will take you beyond what is readily available online - which means you stand a good chance of articulating something more insightful, or opening up one of these reviews into the foundations of your written assignment (for example). Tom suggests 'more books would help' - he's right: 'more books ALWAYS help an undergraduate!' :D However, your Harvard referencing isn't quite right - after the quote is should be (Dennis: 2007) - that is, if 'Dennis' is the surname; if 'Dennis' is the writer's first name, it shouldn't be used in the citation, only the surname. Be sure to check out the referencing guide in the Rough Guide available on myUCA<br /><br />Also - tonally, your review IS a little on the descriptive side - as opposed to digging into the thematic meat and potatoes - BUT, Stitch, a few nitpicks aside, you've obviously invested in this, it's well presented - and it bodes well!tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5530298882470075663.post-71924725520868338852011-09-20T10:19:35.406-07:002011-09-20T10:19:35.406-07:00More books would help here. Sometimes the more int...More books would help here. Sometimes the more interesting opinions can only be found in print. A writer has more space to manoeuvre and open up more speculative approaches to analyse.<br /><br />Obviously the UCA library can't cater for every single subject. so Google Books and Athens are your friends here.<br /><br />Also, in the actual text. You have to include a date and page number in your reference.Tom Beghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07926430061599921376noreply@blogger.com