Thursday, 9 February 2012

Unit 4: Story Telling - "The Long Shot" First Draft

The Long Shot First Draft

1 comment:

  1. I like it! ^_^ With some good timing you can really emphasize the comedy in this. Though remember 'the magic 3' rule... I wonder if you need 4 events for the audience to get you premise?
    And who is the 'the infamous Tyrant'?
    I can imagine your Alistair as a really long, exaggerated character so when he takes a beating his body really forms to the shape of the pain.
    Going to be really good :) x