I like it! ^_^ With some good timing you can really emphasize the comedy in this. Though remember 'the magic 3' rule... I wonder if you need 4 events for the audience to get you premise? And who is the 'the infamous Tyrant'? I can imagine your Alistair as a really long, exaggerated character so when he takes a beating his body really forms to the shape of the pain. Going to be really good :) x
I like it! ^_^ With some good timing you can really emphasize the comedy in this. Though remember 'the magic 3' rule... I wonder if you need 4 events for the audience to get you premise?
ReplyDeleteAnd who is the 'the infamous Tyrant'?
I can imagine your Alistair as a really long, exaggerated character so when he takes a beating his body really forms to the shape of the pain.
Going to be really good :) x